v2.0 Extras

Here are some excerpts that was originally in the story.
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From C3
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“En garde! Fencers ready? Fence!”
I watched as the fencers faced each other. Ms Daniels crossed her arms, watching the duel. A sudden beep rang out in the gymnasium.
“This bout goes to Bethany.”
Bethany took off her mask, smiling, and shook hands with her opponent.
I had been [...]

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v2.0 C6.3

It is 6.3, isn’t it? Oh well. This portion will be edited soon, I expect.
I sighed as I trudged back into the house. Closing the door behind me, I saw a pair of high heels displayed right beside the door. It was studded with diamonds and all sorts of shiny gems, on top of being [...]

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v2.0 C6.2

And here we go…
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The day progressed. At Lunch, Chris asked Erica about my blouse. I turned away from them pointedly and stared at where my brother was seated, disgruntled. As usual, a group of girls were flirting around him. He was attracting a lot of envious glances, even though he was talking to another boy, [...]

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v2.0 C6.1

Finally. We’re going on to chapter six. Schließlich!
In the previous post…
I lifted the shopping bags, grimacing. “What does it seem like to you?”
He cocked an eyebrow. “I didn’t know you liked to shop.”
I frowned. “I don’t.” I shuddered, rubbing my arms. “But it’s a bloody necessity, according to some.”
Chris chuckled at the murderous expression on [...]

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v2.0 C5.3.3

Re-edit of edited post. Pay attention to bolded section(s).
I shivered as a cool breeze swept over me. I was beginning to have second thoughts about walking the few kilometres back to my house. It was late, and while Father had chosen the neighbourhood for its safety, there was still a relatively high chance that a [...]

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