No, I didn’t write this poem. Catfish/amoeba/yongie wrote it.
Random poem
by the great me
I feel daunted
not by challenges
but by traps.
I feel trapped
not by darkness
but by constraints.
I feel constrained
not by chains
but by time frames.
But in fact,
you know that,
the truth is,
I like challenges
testing yourself:
exhilarating.
I like darkness
quiet solitude:
peace.
I like chains
solid reminders:
duty-bound.
But time frames,
time frames,
time frames…
Are open boundaries,
not rivers,
but trees.
Linked to others,
by branches,
and leaves.
Hence they are,
fairly crossable…
I think?
Ahhh. No doubt inspired by the amount of homework and the time frames that come with them.
Sighs. I like the rhyme… “(Time frames) Are open boundaries, not rivers, but trees. Linked to others, by branches, and leaves.”
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Category changed.
It isn’t exactly macabre, but well, you get the gist.
eh really? it wasn’t intentional. it was blabberish.
thanks for the help (:
why did you post this in the category twins!? delete this.
You’re welcome. (:
Sorry about that, I forgot to reset the category. It’s set to Twins on default.
XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
oh my yongie XDDD
i didnt get the last part.
what do you mean crossable?
and yay! all hail the marvelous author XDD
it’s pretty nice XD
it refers to the concept that time is not like a river (ie straight flowing, cannot get back) but like a tree, where branches cross each other hence it is possible to jump from one branch of time to another. or transcending into the forth dimension (time) and moving around in it.
also refers to the way time flows differently for animals(?) as they don’t view things the same way as i do. or something…don’t really quite get it myself. it’s kinda like a concept you ‘get’ but can’t explain.
the first half was about schoolwork. then about datelines (deadlines!) then i continued it on another day and it became time-related.
ahh, how cheem.
Interesting read
I like the rhythm of the poem.
guess what?!?!?!?! i have 100 suscribers on youtube (: (: i feel loved. oh no this is not doing my ego any good…
-ish confuddled-
anyway i sorta get it ><
and what do you have on youtube that is so popular?